حوار لم يحدث
قلت لها : لا نقدم سوى السرير والافطار
قالت : ماذا تقدمون على الافطار؟
قلت : هذا يتوقف على أدائك فى السرير
posted by Hima @ 1:56 AM
3 comments
فلان و فلانة
و يظل البدر طوال الدهر لا يكبر عن منتصف الشهر.... أمل دنقل
Saturday, October 28, 2006
قالت : ماذا تقدمون على الافطار؟
قلت : هذا يتوقف على أدائك فى السرير
3 Comments:
:)
mashy
This is the most concise , presice and eloquent poem i ve read for you.
you had been magnificently smart in describing a full story in less than 25 words.
in my point of view, its a poem that describes mentalities of a certain strata of the society ( the mentality of the middle class strata of the revolution in Egypt 1950s especially the military,...etc)
Congratulations.
Nesreen
This is the most Concise, Precise and eloquent poem i ve read for you.
you have been manficently smart in describing a full story in less than 25 words.
In My point of view it describes mentalities of a certain strata of a society ( might be adequate to the mentalities of the middle class starta of the egyptian society at the fiftees; the revolutionist middle class starta especially the military,....etc).
In brief i see that it might convey a message about
classes who are merely drived by instinct to fulfill their frustrated desires in life).
i'm confident that such poem would gain the plaudits of those who appreciate eloquence.
Congratulations
Nesreen ;-)
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